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Friday 16 June 2017

Writing-Emotions: Highlanders vs Lions

Walht: Show not tell emotions.
Writing-Emotions: Highlanders vs Lions


The Lions all had no emotions left at the end of the game. They were all disheartened. The frowns on their faces and their crying showed no sportsmanship in this game. Of course they had their hands on their head looking straight at the ground. Well, the Lions breathed slowly in and out, talked to the other players and shook hands with the other team.” They all looked miserable. The captain comforted them by putting his arm around his players and saying “There’s always next time.”



The Highlanders had the biggest smiles on their faces. They all were hugging, throwing their hands in the air and jumping up and down. They laughed and screamed with their heads held high, running to shake the other team's hands. They were all overjoyed, glad and ecstatic. Everyone was running and dancing through the air as they were heading to the changing rooms. As the fans screamed and cheered the Highlanders waved energetically.

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