“Hurry up”said mum “the taxi will be here any minute”.“Okay” I replied and hurriedly i got dressed and sprinted extremely fast downstairs.
paragraph 1
Unexpectedly I felt sick so I moned to my mum, she then said”, okey okey you're not going to school”so I stayed home with my nana.I did not have a good day thou, did not eat or sleep.I took a medicine after a while I had a sore head so I waited for 4 hours and then took a tablet.I really got sick I had to go to the hospital.
conclusion
I threw up, it was the biggest one that I had done.I was in pain so I said can I see a doctor, so my mum went to go and find a doctor.I was so happy and sad. I was only happy because I got to have a big feed and the sad bit was all because I had to have plain bread to ease my tummy.
1 comments:
Wow Mya i did read your story it was a lovely story and you did not have mistakes on your writing.
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