The haunted house at Glen Innes school
One day at Glen Innes School there were a bunch of kids in room 11 and they were Mya the leader,Angel,Siunipa,Memory,Sita,Jolie,Jazire,
Vedel and Alicia they were good kids but there were three kids that were naughty, but also good.
One day we had to help our teacher with the PMP stuff and we had to get it ready for rooms one,two,three and four.But the stuff where in a house that no one would go in it was right at the back of the school in the bushes some people said that if you go in there something would happen to you and I said “Like bad luck”.Then Sita and Alicia said “But there is a problem I don’t want to get bad luck” I said ‘Ok’ then we will just tell Mr Ramkolowan that we can’t go in because we have to go and help another teacher”. Then there was a strange voice coming from the house but then it changed its voice and it sounded like jolie's little sister’s voice and she thought that it was her so then jolie ran and said “Go get help and you guys help me get her out “ Then Jolie started to cry, but then we got it open and Jolie got sucked in and then she got bad luck we were trying to get her out but she would just not come out, but she was fine but when she walked she would always fall over.When there would be a hard object she would hit herself on it and she would just be all crazy and stupid. She would go to the hospital because of her injuries in her brain and other places.So we said ok we need to do something so we went and made a plan about what we are going to do to get the bad luck out of her so I said “So if it want’s to give bad luck then we should just get a doll and throw it in and then maybe the bad luck would be gone and into the doll” Jazire said “That’s a good I’dea but who has a plush” Memory said “My little sister has one” we said ok let’s go and we have a little more time until she has surgry. So we went and put the doll in.
We went and said wait don’t do it because she was only having bad luck. We all said Jolie are you okay she said ‘Yes because of you guys thanks”. We all went home and went to bed and now we know never go into a haunted house again.
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Hi Mya
Good job. I really enjoyed your story.
Good job and keep up the good work.
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