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Wednesday 8 March 2017

Descriptive Paragraph:Lava Cakes


Smell
Taste
Hear
Feel
Sight
Chocolate
Butter
Rich
Warm


Soft
Warm
Brown
Chocolate
Soft


Walt:Write a Descriptive Paragraph


Success Criteria
  1. Use Precise Verbs
  2. Vivid verbs
  3. Show not tell
  4. Use Figurative Language
I glanced at the brown,soft,chocolate that was cooling down with that rich,buttery chocolate smell.I could hear the air bubbles popping from a distance.As I was going to do my work that soft, warm lava cake shot everywhere with that smell. I recognized faces of disgust, fright and worry. The feeling of the textured,warm,buttery feeling shot into my hand as it went in. It shot down my esophagus it melted as quick as ice in a desert.

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