This is a fantastic effort at a limerick poem! I like that you move from a slow panic to leaving the reader in anticipation as their heads spring up but we don't know why... Did they land safely? Did they land in the wrong place? I wonder what happened...
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Hi Mya
What a amazing poem!!! How did you come up with some awesome ideas??
Hey Mya!
This is a fantastic effort at a limerick poem! I like that you move from a slow panic to leaving the reader in anticipation as their heads spring up but we don't know why... Did they land safely? Did they land in the wrong place? I wonder what happened...
Well done Mya!
Nicky :)
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