Friday 29 December 2017
Summer Learning Journey Week 2 Day 4 Bonus Activity
One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you… Start searching to see where this smoke is coming from as I see our ship blown up with injured people trying to get help.
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Hey Mya
What a awesome start. How do you feel about this story???
Hi Mya,
A great start to your story! So far we're left in suspense, not knowing what's going to happen... To receive full points, do you think you could add to your story to make it about 8-10 sentences long? If you were the nurse, what would you do? Are there any heroes in the story?
Nicky :)
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